Started by Shiral, April 20, 2023, 01:28:16 AM
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Quote from: Nezz on April 20, 2023, 01:37:42 AMmakes another tally mark in the Who-thinks-Kelson-is-hot? board
Quote from: Salic on April 21, 2023, 02:30:32 PMI really like the start of this story, Shiral. I like how you blended Araxie into the natural setting of her island home. I'm happy to see that your appraisal of Araxie is what I thought it was. I believe she was ambivalent to Kelson initially before she fell in love. It's regrettable that dynastic marriages begin cold because many times they are not for love but rather for money and power. But if a dynastic couple are gifted and are able to fall in love, the relationship becomes more intimate, even hotter. I think that, in your story, you're going to give us all a good demonstration of that relationship between Kelson and Araxie.Thanks again for your story.
Quote from: revanne on April 20, 2023, 02:46:41 AMLovely Shiral. Let's just hope Brecon isn't a closet botanist.Seriously, such a lovely and believable picture of two sisters together.
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