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Best Judgment- 2nd installment

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Elec P. Carpenter:
Actually, I have enough to link to a Google Drive doc like I did The Passing. I was waiting to pass a certain point before I linked. I won't post more teasers, just mentions to check in for another dozen pages or so.

Elkhound:
IMHO, there was too much exposition here.  This was not so much a story as a gigantic info-dump.

Elec P. Carpenter:

--- Quote from: Elkhound on November 02, 2014, 08:31:54 pm ---IMHO, there was too much exposition here.  This was not so much a story as a gigantic info-dump.

--- End quote ---

My fault. I need to budget more than 47 minutes to write something I post for others to read. I won't make that mistake again.

Laurna:
I like Sir Albin Haldane, and this unnamed assassin will be a difficult challenge. I foresee a few harrowing encounters in Prince Albin's future.

Jerusha:
I'm looking forward to the next chapters and finding out how Sir Albin's current, hard-line attitude towards thieves and criminals leads to a "Best Judgment."

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