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Re: Start
« Reply #15 on: April 16, 2008, 01:44:47 pm »
  I often wonder if, after going through the betrothal, Araxie and her sister and perhaps their mother had a late night confab about the whole proposal, and Araxie told her sister how she REALLY felt about the whole thing. Being a king is not simple and being a queen isn't, either. Always wonder if she felt overwhelmed by what she'd sworn to do, or wished she could back out of the whole deal, or if she was going to be queen as a formality  and as a convenient breeder of heirs without a real, sustainable marriage while Kelson was busy canoodling with Rothana, instead. I still wonder if she truly feels Rothana's presence in Rhemuth is that great an idea!

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« Reply #16 on: April 28, 2008, 02:09:50 pm »
  I often wonder if, after going through the betrothal, Araxie and her sister and perhaps their mother had a late night confab about the whole proposal, and Araxie told her sister how she REALLY felt about the whole thing. Being a king is not simple and being a queen isn't, either. Always wonder if she felt overwhelmed by what she'd sworn to do, or wished she could back out of the whole deal, or if she was going to be queen as a formality  and as a convenient breeder of heirs without a real, sustainable marriage while Kelson was busy canoodling with Rothana, instead. I still wonder if she truly feels Rothana's presence in Rhemuth is that great an idea!

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Do Fanfics have a particular scent? =o)

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« Reply #17 on: April 29, 2008, 09:29:33 am »

Do Fanfics have a particular scent? =o)

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Not so much a definable scent.   It's the pheromones!  :D
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« Reply #18 on: May 01, 2008, 01:43:54 pm »

Do Fanfics have a particular scent? =o)

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Not so much a definable scent.   It's the pheromones!  :D

Good God, do you mean, Haldane SEX????  ;)

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« Reply #19 on: August 12, 2008, 01:11:27 am »
I think KK was in a tough spot when she wrote Kelson's story for KKB.  Although the story takes place 3 years after QSC Kelson acts as if those events were months, not years, ago.  No 18 year old man would have that difficult of a time recovering from Rothana, no matter how much he loved her.  But I think KK wanted to show Kelson's acceptance of Rothana's refusal and his developing love of Araxie all in one book.  Because Liam needed to age 3 years between the books, KKB started 3 years later.  But almost nothing happened in those 3 years, all the dangling plot threads conveniently waited until Liam turned 14.

My biggest criticism of the book is the lack of bringing Araxie more into the story.  I would have loved to see her involved in the Torenthy intrigue and more fully flesh out her character. 

After reading the Codex sections on Torenth it seems like a very interesting place.  I'd look to see more stories centered there.

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« Reply #20 on: August 12, 2008, 02:35:32 pm »
Some of her other books suffered from cramming enough plot for a trilogy into a single book (ITKS, for example); I think this story could have benefitted from being padded into a trilogy, or at least a duology.

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« Reply #21 on: September 04, 2008, 11:44:34 am »
Hi all! I finally come back here!
I finished to read the book and, actually, I think it left lots of stories and situation uncompleted: Teymouraz, Nigel and his grandson and grandaughters.
But like it, not very much the part of Liam coronation and, before, the training of Kelson, it was a little...boring.
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« Reply #22 on: December 23, 2008, 09:18:20 pm »

Good God, do you mean, Haldane SEX????  ;)

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« Reply #23 on: January 31, 2009, 07:24:28 pm »
I think it hearkens back to other books: despite the title, there's more going on than just Kelson's marriage problems--KK has a lot of balls in the air in this one.
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« Reply #24 on: February 25, 2009, 03:37:09 pm »
I agree; and there are so many loose ends that I will be majorly disappointed in her if there is nothing past KKB.

I'd love to fast-forward to the fifteenth or sixteenth centuries, to see what forms the Renaissance, Reformation, and Age of Exploration take in that world.

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« Reply #25 on: February 26, 2009, 12:17:59 am »
There's some hints in the Codex...Teymuraz went and married a Byzantine princess (and sired heirs). Hmm... "byzantine" is a byword for complication and intrigue. I shouldn't be surprised if Kelric grows up to help cope with a Byzantine invasion of both Torenth and Gwynedd...
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« Reply #26 on: March 12, 2009, 06:53:48 pm »
According to the Codex, the Byzantines of the Deryni world ruled much of the land that now makes up the 11 Kingdoms.  I would like to see a 21st Century Deryni story to see how the 11 Kingdoms compare to our world.
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« Reply #27 on: April 24, 2009, 05:06:20 pm »
   I do agree that Araxie should have required a little more winning over from Kelson.Melissa
I believe that there was a lot more winning over done, but it was off stage, done by Rothana. At least that's what I remember reading, without having the book in front of me now.

 


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