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There are exceptions, and then there is stretching the limits of credibility. That's the trap I'm trying to avoid.
Evie is a very good choice for that. Not only did she NOT shred my first story, she gently pointed out that a "heard of horses" was not exactly what I meant to say, and she has a knack for cheerfully pointing out that what I probably meant to say was not what I wrote.Of course, there may have been a snicker or two along the way....
As for this conversation, it has inspired a chapter I was fumbling over. It was titled mother and daughter, but I could not make an interesting conversation between them.
I just really am plagued by doubts, and fear that once the stories are posted (if ever!) I'll be bombarded by people saying, "Wait a minute, that doesn't work because [insert glaringly obvious error that I somehow missed].That is what Beta Readers are for.
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